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10 years walking
breathing
practicing attention
to those small things
your heart beat
your head bob
the fold of your legs
unbidden
a quiver
not of lip
but of thigh
that hesitation makes you miss
the swing
raising your handicap
but, not necessarily
lowering your score
if you keep playing
mefr 05/06/08
breathing
practicing attention
to those small things
your heart beat
your head bob
the fold of your legs
unbidden
a quiver
not of lip
but of thigh
that hesitation makes you miss
the swing
raising your handicap
but, not necessarily
lowering your score
if you keep playing
mefr 05/06/08
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Re: paying attention
Mon, June 23, 2008 - 6:00 AMYes, this works on more than one level for me.
A good poem, well crafted.
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